Plain Language Exercise Eleven Takeaways
Sample revised text as viewed on Hemingwayapp.com (click to expand):
Transcript of revised text:
Notice the following:
- The new text passes all of the Hemingway App's tests and nothing is highlighted
- The readability score has dropped to 7
- The word count has dropped to 39 - nearly half of the original text!
- The effective date of the change has been moved to the end as that information is less important than the changed policy itself